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Rhet
Posts: 198
Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2017 6:47 pm
OOC: sid
IGN: Rhet
Lineage: Schiaraffa

Tue Jun 12, 2018 7:36 am

#YOUGOGRINCOCO
M A H O R E L A | | A M A N D I N E | | D E D R A A K | | S C H I A R A F F A
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ira
Posts: 127
Joined: Thu Oct 26, 2017 2:34 am
IGN: ira

Thu Jul 12, 2018 11:14 pm

Kingsley wrote:So if you're gonna break my heart, just break it...and if you're gonna take your shot, then take it.

If you made up your mind, then make it. Make this fast..

If you ever loved me,

Have mercy
[ WHERE HAVE ALL THE GOOD MEN GONE AND WHERE ARE ALL THE GODS? ]
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[ WHERE'S THE STREETWISE HERCULES TO FIGHT THE RISING ODDS? ]
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Eli Hartley
Posts: 138
Joined: Fri Sep 22, 2017 4:51 pm
OOC: nobody
IGN: Eli Hartley

Wed Sep 05, 2018 5:08 pm

Legs and arms and shoulders that never did seem to adapt to being outside despite frequency. Just peeled and grew more awful freckles like the snake-shed unveiling of new constellations.
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from my rotting body flowers shall grow, and I am in them, and that is eternity

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Claws
Posts: 42
Joined: Sun Oct 28, 2018 7:32 pm
OOC: Keo
IGN: Claws
Graphic Artist: Tex

Sat Dec 08, 2018 9:23 am

DeSoto wrote:a whole world of white, black and grey and Claws was the only one he'd found made of colour; bright, vivid and dazzling.
Just take my whole heart with that one.

I'm serious, it was one of the things you read and stop and just kinda stare at your screen like 'this just hit me in the fucking heart.' It's beautiful and you now write for Halsey.
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In and out like a motherfucking thief
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Alex Ayres
Posts: 1360
Joined: Wed Nov 01, 2017 6:49 pm
Location: A Cabin in the Woods
OOC: Alessio
IGN: AlexAyres
Lineage: LoL

Fri Dec 14, 2018 8:28 am

Shine wrote:
Fri Dec 14, 2018 12:35 am
Her rest came as white began building around her, until the snowy shroud left behind nothing more than an undisturbed winter wonderland.
Haunting and beautiful.
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Mirra
Posts: 50
Joined: Mon Sep 25, 2017 9:45 am
IGN: Mirra

Sun Dec 16, 2018 1:59 pm

Mag wrote:
Sun Dec 16, 2018 11:48 am
Rubber skids on wet pavement and metal twists around body, soft skin, and again around metal and concrete crashing together, car wrapping around a body wrapping around a pole, shattering your quiet, oh, city, the cabbie flying out of his front window like a god flying down to earth in all its unnatural glory. The tinkling of glass! The rattling of brains! The red umbrella!

The drunk sees it all, and it all happens in less than a minute.

And then again it’s quiet.

He laughs once. Keeps walking. Sings his song.

Oh, window
Oh, rain
Oh, city.


The image dissipates into smoke. The bulul sits with the dumbness and all-knowing of the ancestors. Magwayen doesn’t know what she’s seen, or why she’s seen it, or who sent her that little movie, but by and by she hears ambulance sirens wailing down the street.

When she can find her feet, she will peer out of her window like so many rubberneckers to confirm what she's already seen. She will follow the drunk home. She will knock on his door. She will say, teach me that song, and with a winning smile invite herself in for a little drink.
Gorgeous imagery and the varied sentence structure/length makes it easy and compelling to read. I enjoyed the whole piece, but especially this.
DANNY | NATHAN | SCOOTER | WESLEY
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Yawa
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Joined: Fri Dec 01, 2017 1:53 am
OOC: Nikki
IGN: YAWA
Lineage: Schiaraffa
Graphic Artist: Kris

Sun Dec 16, 2018 4:41 pm

Mirra wrote:
Sun Dec 16, 2018 1:59 pm
Gorgeous imagery and the varied sentence structure/length makes it easy and compelling to read. I enjoyed the whole piece, but especially this.
Ahhh, thank you! that's really nice, you're great
MAHORELA. AMANDINE. DE DRAAK. SCHIARAFFA

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A KNIFE THAT DOESN'T KNOW WHERE TO GO IS A BLADE WASTED;
A VAMPIRE WITHOUT PURPOSE IS A PARASITE
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Yawa
Posts: 642
Joined: Fri Dec 01, 2017 1:53 am
OOC: Nikki
IGN: YAWA
Lineage: Schiaraffa
Graphic Artist: Kris

Sat Jan 26, 2019 4:50 am

xxsacrificexx wrote:
Fri Jan 25, 2019 4:46 pm
You sever. You sever that link and with it all of the unspoken rules you hung over your own head. With it, all of the shoulders you had to stand on, all of the hands that would catch you when you fell.
fu
MAHORELA. AMANDINE. DE DRAAK. SCHIARAFFA

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A KNIFE THAT DOESN'T KNOW WHERE TO GO IS A BLADE WASTED;
A VAMPIRE WITHOUT PURPOSE IS A PARASITE
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xxsacrificexx
Posts: 481
Joined: Tue Oct 16, 2018 9:37 pm
OOC: B
IGN: xxsacrificexx
Graphic Artist: Harv
IC/OOC Only: Both

Sat Jan 26, 2019 7:17 pm

Mag wrote:
Sat Jan 26, 2019 4:50 am
xxsacrificexx wrote:
Fri Jan 25, 2019 4:46 pm
You sever. You sever that link and with it all of the unspoken rules you hung over your own head. With it, all of the shoulders you had to stand on, all of the hands that would catch you when you fell.
fu
D: wut
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Yawa
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Joined: Fri Dec 01, 2017 1:53 am
OOC: Nikki
IGN: YAWA
Lineage: Schiaraffa
Graphic Artist: Kris

Wed Feb 13, 2019 7:39 am

Phineas wrote:Phineas had tested a volatile boundary and his search for happy.
what the fuck dude
it's so creamy
it's so creamy :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
MAHORELA. AMANDINE. DE DRAAK. SCHIARAFFA

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A KNIFE THAT DOESN'T KNOW WHERE TO GO IS A BLADE WASTED;
A VAMPIRE WITHOUT PURPOSE IS A PARASITE
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