Ab Antiquo

This is graphically gorgeous and poetically written.

I swear I'm not biased. I admire your ability to write your characters without editing anything out to make it a more pleasant delivery.

And a friendly reminder to use this thread, because I love it.

Thank you, Harvey!

Also, thank you for the reminder about that thread. Helpful for the lines that lodge in my head that have no home.

Thank you, my dood.
It's appreciated greatly and maybe I'll continue it soon.

I also second Andrea's piece. It's interesting to look at, and always a unique, unapologetic perspective.

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and this.

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The boy is back in town!
I enjoy his perspective and the teensy, tiny snippet of perspective.

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I really love this, Desi. I like the way that you tied in the events that occurred to make it like a final chapter to your character and the emotion that was put into the writing is spectacular.

I'll miss the character Soledad but I'm hoping that this doesn't mean we all lose looksees at your writing.

Madadh wrote: ↑

Mon Jul 16, 2018 3:41 pm

click.

and this.

Hey, thanks.

Vetras wrote: ↑

Tue Jul 17, 2018 2:57 pm

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I really love this, Desi. I like the way that you tied in the events that occurred to make it like a final chapter to your character and the emotion that was put into the writing is spectacular.

I'll miss the character Soledad but I'm hoping that this doesn't mean we all lose looksees at your writing.

Thank you hun. There's more to come with this writing- unfortunately right now I've just started a new job so work is taking priority but the rest will follow once I have a moment to do so. And while I will miss Soledad as a character as well, I promise I will do my best to let you still get peeks at writing through the others that live on yet.

I'm glad to hear it, Desi. I look forward to seeing more~

A few other roleplays I'd like to appreciate:

Badass - I adore this perspective and the detail that this writer put into their work. This type of character I'm a sucker for because it's one that's kept its traditions despite time running forward without them. If you haven't read this yet, give it a look and I hope there's more to be added.

Airhead Adventures - I don't think that I ever get to see enough of your writing, Eri but this was an excellent read. You slowed down time for the audience in a way where it was easy to picture and gave a peek of Airey that I don't think that I've seen before, which is utterly refreshing. Sole and Drusilla's combined efforts make my heart sing because they are beautifully collaborated and shows a new style by taking portions of both writers.

Lastly, This Is Amazeballs - The first post grabbed me immediately. It was very poetic and enticing for the reader. As the writing continued, it reminded me a little of how Chuck Palahniuk's writing (ultimately my favorite author ever). In most of his writing, there are little internal thoughts that speckle the pages. Sometimes there's small snippets of comic relief or something to add to the imagery and it brings the whole piece together in a way that holds the reader the entire time.

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Thoroughly enjoyed the second post! I love the inner turmoil (who doesn't) of a character and the way it can be so thoroughly put into a piece of work like this. Good job!