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Lyrene
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OOC: Jem
IGN: Sabrene
Lineage: Wilde
Graphic Artist: Anders

Sun Jan 27, 2019 4:14 am

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I don't know how to make the linky things on my kindle...but this is the one I'm loving at the moment.

It's short but succinct. I can feel sacri's pain, confusion and self-destroying-ness ? through the words and I think it's beautiful writing.
She stood in the storm, and when the wind did not blow her away she adjusted her crown and kept
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xxsacrificexx
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OOC: Brandy
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Lineage: Houlihan
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Sun Jan 27, 2019 12:31 pm

Awh ty~
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Ember
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OOC: Flower
IGN: Ember Argent
Lineage: Beefcake
Graphic Artist: Self

Sun Jan 27, 2019 4:52 pm

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Very much enjoyed reading this. :D Adds a lot to background.
Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness.
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It took me years to understand that this, too, was a gift.
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Joy
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OOC: Katie
IGN: Joy
Lineage: de Draak

Wed Jan 30, 2019 8:20 pm

Ember wrote: ↑
Sun Jan 27, 2019 4:52 pm
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Very much enjoyed reading this. :D Adds a lot to background.
Just read it myself and really loved it. It stayed interesting start to finish, read easily and gave a great look into Seyda's POV. I'm a visual reader and it means a lot to me when a writer sets a scene I can clearly understand.

Question...is Liv a character nickname for Seyda?
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Seyda
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OOC: Stephanie
IGN: Seyda
Lineage: St. John
Graphic Artist: Kenna

Wed Jan 30, 2019 8:22 pm

Thank you :) And that’s her human name
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Sunday-Go
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IGN: Sunday-Go

Wed Jan 30, 2019 10:32 pm

Jauk wrote: ↑
Wed Jan 30, 2019 8:20 pm
Ember wrote: ↑
Sun Jan 27, 2019 4:52 pm
 viewtopic.php?f=15&t=1482

Very much enjoyed reading this. :D Adds a lot to background.
Just read it myself and really loved it. It stayed interesting start to finish, read easily and gave a great look into Seyda's POV. I'm a visual reader and it means a lot to me when a writer sets a scene I can clearly understand.

Question...is Liv a character nickname for Seyda?
This!
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Yawa
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OOC: Nikki D.
IGN: YAWA
Lineage: Schiaraffa

Thu Jan 31, 2019 1:41 am

God damn, you guys.
𝕊 ℂ ℍ 𝕀 𝔸 ℝ 𝔸 𝔽 𝔽 𝔸
R I O T
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xxsacrificexx
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Fri Feb 01, 2019 5:35 pm

Mag wrote: ↑
Thu Jan 31, 2019 1:41 am
 God damn, you guys.
Right?!? Jauk is one of my favorite characters. Her stories are the best. I live the way this latest one feels so desperately heavy and then builds into adorable hysteria? Idk how she does it but I can't even build myself up to respond yet because I don't think I can really match it
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ophelia
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Fri Feb 01, 2019 6:54 pm

xxsacrificexx wrote: ↑
Fri Feb 01, 2019 5:35 pm
Mag wrote: ↑
Thu Jan 31, 2019 1:41 am
 God damn, you guys.
Right?!? Jauk is one of my favorite characters. Her stories are the best. I live the way this latest one feels so desperately heavy and then builds into adorable hysteria? Idk how she does it but I can't even build myself up to respond yet because I don't think I can really match it
I love her writing. And let's be real- she also nailed a typical Jauk/ophelia conversation in one shot
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xxsacrificexx
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Fri Feb 01, 2019 11:30 pm

ophelia wrote: ↑
Fri Feb 01, 2019 6:54 pm
xxsacrificexx wrote: ↑
Fri Feb 01, 2019 5:35 pm
Mag wrote: ↑
Thu Jan 31, 2019 1:41 am
 God damn, you guys.
Right?!? Jauk is one of my favorite characters. Her stories are the best. I live the way this latest one feels so desperately heavy and then builds into adorable hysteria? Idk how she does it but I can't even build myself up to respond yet because I don't think I can really match it
I love her writing. And let's be real- she also nailed a typical Jauk/ophelia conversation in one shot
Absofuckinglutely. I actually assumed she must have written it with you? idk it was just very well done
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