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Oscar
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Sun Nov 26, 2017 11:25 pm

Jacob wrote:
Sun Nov 26, 2017 2:26 am
I made a thing.

I am not sure if I enjoy this things

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I love the color on that, Hamp. I'd say make his face a little more opaque on the left, though.

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Deston
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Sun Nov 26, 2017 11:53 pm

Jacob wrote:
Sun Nov 26, 2017 2:26 am
I made a thing.

I am not sure if I enjoy this things

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I agree. I'd bring his face forward, and maybe blend out the bottom of the layer with the road. You can see where it ends in the middle of the graphic, but I really like the gif you chose, and the expression is pleasant and doe-eyed.
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Madadh
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Mon Nov 27, 2017 2:43 pm

I'd give the same advice.

Everything looks great, but I'd make the left side of the face more visible and then blend out the road, too.

It's a very, very nice composition!
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Tue Nov 28, 2017 12:47 am

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Made it less eyebleedy thanks to help from Lily,Rach,Bean, and Mea
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ira
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Tue Nov 28, 2017 1:57 pm

It looks wonderful!

The fixed saturation, brightness change, and the vignette really bring out the background. I love that I can see more details in the overall image, now, and that Jacob's model's face is more clear.
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Tue Nov 28, 2017 2:05 pm

Marias wrote:
Tue Nov 28, 2017 12:47 am
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Made it less eyebleedy thanks to help from Lily,Rach,Bean, and Mea
I love it, but admittedly, the left half of his head reminds me of Dear David :shock:
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Kamon
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Tue Nov 28, 2017 2:21 pm

Amazing, Hampton! :D
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Tue Nov 28, 2017 2:40 pm

Marias wrote:
Tue Nov 28, 2017 12:47 am
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Made it less eyebleedy thanks to help from Lily,Rach,Bean, and Mea
I really like that.
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Wed Nov 29, 2017 12:28 am

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Wed Nov 29, 2017 5:06 pm

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