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Jenny
Posts: 472
Joined: Mon Sep 18, 2017 10:06 am
Location: Steel and 45th
IGN: Jenny
Clan: House of Silence
Lineage: O’Collin
Graphic Artist: Harv
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Tue May 15, 2018 11:14 am

Greyce wrote:
Tue May 15, 2018 11:08 am
Idk who you are, but this is great and terrible and I feel conflicted about it.
viewtopic.php?f=17&t=935
It’s very descriptive writing, but it makes me feel queasy, so well done? :?
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Rain
Posts: 304
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OOC: Romi
IGN: Nahm
Lineage: der Toten

Tue May 15, 2018 11:30 am

Greyce wrote:
Tue May 15, 2018 11:08 am
Idk who you are, but this is great and terrible and I feel conflicted about it.
viewtopic.php?f=17&t=935
I am 100% into this. Let's go. Where's the rest?
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Dea
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Lineage: Mahorela
Graphic Artist: Harv!

Wed May 16, 2018 5:57 pm

The entire thread about Liander.

Heart wrenching and beautifully done.
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Mahorela | Flesh of His Flesh
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Arallara
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Lineage: Blackstone
Graphic Artist: Tessa

Wed May 16, 2018 6:14 pm

Dea wrote:
Wed May 16, 2018 5:57 pm
The entire thread about Liander.

Heart wrenching and beautifully done.
Agreed. 100% great writing showing amazing emotion for a character that touched most of the city in some way.
<3 Anthony’s <3
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Ezra
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Location: Ivy 38
OOC: Micah
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Lineage: de Draak

Wed May 16, 2018 6:24 pm

thanks everybody! we appreciate it. as my OOC note stated, if you have a response to Liander's death that you wanna get out, feel free to respond in that thread!
laeti vescimur nos subacturis
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Ember
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Wed May 16, 2018 6:47 pm

Ezra wrote:
Wed May 16, 2018 6:24 pm
thanks everybody! we appreciate it. as my OOC note stated, if you have a response to Liander's death that you wanna get out, feel free to respond in that thread!
I'll try to work on mine tonight or tomorrow.

So heartwrenching a read, though. Right in the feels guys, thanks. :oops:
Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness.
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It took me years to understand that this, too, was a gift.
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Jenny
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Wed May 16, 2018 6:54 pm

Arallara wrote:
Wed May 16, 2018 6:14 pm
Dea wrote:
Wed May 16, 2018 5:57 pm
The entire thread about Liander.

Heart wrenching and beautifully done.
Agreed. 100% great writing showing amazing emotion for a character that touched most of the city in some way.
+1
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Seppuku
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OOC: Megatron
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Lineage: Corvidae

Wed May 16, 2018 7:40 pm

in the company of birds
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O R N I T H O L O G Y
Lucky me, I see ghosts.
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Ezra
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Wed May 16, 2018 7:50 pm

Seppuku wrote:
Wed May 16, 2018 7:40 pm
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Beautiful.
gah I always wish I could make words like Kris.
One day, it'll get lighter. That's what they all say. One day, you'll forget the weight of those you left behind. One day, it won't make you ache or sting tears into your eyes. One day, the boulder will crest the mountain, and all of this pointless toil will be over. One day, you'll be able to place all of those stones down, one by one, to lay them to rest in the Earth from whence they came.

Oh, one day, it'll get lighter.
brb fucking crying
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Ember
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Wed May 16, 2018 8:07 pm

Ezra wrote:
Wed May 16, 2018 7:50 pm
Seppuku wrote:
Wed May 16, 2018 7:40 pm
viewtopic.php?f=15&t=940

Beautiful.
gah I always wish I could make words like Kris.
One day, it'll get lighter. That's what they all say. One day, you'll forget the weight of those you left behind. One day, it won't make you ache or sting tears into your eyes. One day, the boulder will crest the mountain, and all of this pointless toil will be over. One day, you'll be able to place all of those stones down, one by one, to lay them to rest in the Earth from whence they came.

Oh, one day, it'll get lighter.
brb fucking crying
Hdjausysjajhd

I'm in public. Can't cry but my throat is tight.
Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness.
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