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Marlo
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Fri Sep 06, 2024 10:27 pm

Dear Diaries Are Stupid by Max [Aly]

Just reread this first post and this hits so hard. I really, really loved it. There's so much character in one journal post and that's super hard to do.
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Marlo
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Sat Sep 07, 2024 1:07 pm

Marlo wrote:
Fri Sep 06, 2024 10:27 pm
Dear Diaries Are Stupid by Max [Aly]

Just reread this first post and this hits so hard. I really, really loved it. There's so much character in one journal post and that's super hard to do.
the update to this was so wholesome. i really enjoyed reading this! xo

Click here for wholesome update!
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Wed Sep 11, 2024 5:03 pm

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I really enjoyed this, it has to be said. I loved the lore behind it, and the action felt punchy and impactful. Fight scenes can sometimes struggle when it comes to pacing, but the cadence of the sentences felt very "in your face." Good read.
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Thu Sep 12, 2024 1:52 pm

Hiram wrote:
Wed Sep 11, 2024 5:03 pm
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I really enjoyed this, it has to be said. I loved the lore behind it, and the action felt punchy and impactful. Fight scenes can sometimes struggle when it comes to pacing, but the cadence of the sentences felt very "in your face." Good read.
Agree! This was a good read, kept me hooked from the beginning!
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Yawa
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Wed Sep 25, 2024 12:51 am

https://abantiquo.aldergate.net/viewtop ... =17&t=3301

Damn. Just... damn, son, feels and lores and everything

ETA: Heck, I am so tired and inarticulate rn but this post is so good and I’ve read it twice now.
MAHORELA. AMANDINE. DE DRAAK. SCHIARAFFA

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A VAMPIRE WITHOUT PURPOSE IS A PARASITE
Hiram
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Wed Sep 25, 2024 6:53 pm

Club Amethyst

Just stopping in to say I loved the various degrees of brutality reflected in this. I love an honest character study and this was a fun read.
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Fri Sep 27, 2024 8:00 pm

Hiram wrote:
Wed Sep 11, 2024 5:03 pm
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I really enjoyed this, it has to be said. I loved the lore behind it, and the action felt punchy and impactful. Fight scenes can sometimes struggle when it comes to pacing, but the cadence of the sentences felt very "in your face." Good read.
agreed!
i love the way the beginning emphasized the loneliness.
Brom wrote:
Wed Sep 11, 2024 1:09 am
Black was staining the snow. Pitch painted the flowers. Void filled in the cracks.
I love the visuals from these lines!
Brom wrote:
Wed Sep 11, 2024 1:09 am
He was being deliberate. Slow. Taking from her like some hummingbird sipping from some delicate flower.
also this part



Hiram wrote:
Wed Sep 25, 2024 6:53 pm
Club Amethyst

Just stopping in to say I loved the various degrees of brutality reflected in this. I love an honest character study and this was a fun read.
I also agree with this!

okay, but kalika is one of my favorite characters to watch and interact with. i love how you always leave little breadcrumbs about her gooey center, for example:
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Wed Sep 25, 2024 3:56 pm
They mumbled their apologies to the exiled woman and ran inside, abandoning her without a second thought while she exited the line and cried. Kalika felt a momentary pang of sympathy for her, an emotion that was quick to dissipate as the next group attempted to gain access.

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Wed Sep 25, 2024 3:56 pm
The familiar flavor of the Irish whiskey coated her mouth and burned all the way down her throat to warm her stomach. It immediately gave her back her sense of control.
I also love the implications of this and the little hints of her personality laced in
Kalika wrote:
Wed Sep 25, 2024 3:56 pm
...desperate and salacious.
yes yes yes
Kalika wrote:
Wed Sep 25, 2024 3:56 pm
Her vision was met with more stars, perhaps the whole Ursa Major constellation,
omg I LOVE this
Kalika wrote:
Wed Sep 25, 2024 3:56 pm
Kalika didn’t actually care, saving an innocent had never been her motive. She simply wanted to find the guilty. And she had found him.
there's so much characterization in this little snip. i love kalika so, so much.


I loved reading both of these pieces. and I know they weren't made to go along with each other, but knowing the characters a little from IC interaction and seeing how Brom has trouble feeling or recognizing pain, while Kalika registers it immediately is a fun little dichotomy!

thank you both for the fun character studies!
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Fri Oct 04, 2024 6:42 am

I like to be good to my own kind. Humans... they can pay and pay until they're dead.
Shrieking. Gaz, pls. I love her so much. Banger of an interview. Hell yeah fuck yeah.
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A VAMPIRE WITHOUT PURPOSE IS A PARASITE
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Marlo
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Mon Oct 07, 2024 8:55 pm

Re: Club Amethyst by Kait

IM A FREAK FOR IT

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Kalika
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Wed Oct 09, 2024 3:12 am

Marlo wrote:
Mon Oct 07, 2024 8:55 pm
Re: Club Amethyst by Kait

IM A FREAK FOR IT

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Thank youuu! :D I’ve been having a good time letting loose this side of Kalika! Also, that gif is sending me.
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