"Home Decrepit Home" by the writer of Orgasmerilla
Your writing is always a joy to read. I love the way you've taken the broad idea of "thralls" that a lot of people use and turned them into actual characters. I've always loved this as a part of your character and I always will. Let the creativity flow! Also, super good uses of showing and not telling. I really enjoyed reading this while having my morning bowl of cereal before work! Also, hi! Welcome back!
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Yes it does, and big thanks for the permission to use it.Yawa wrote: ↑Mon Jul 29, 2024 8:07 pmhttps://abantiquo.aldergate.net/viewtop ... =20&t=3317
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also this cs format slaps
Thank you! It was a great exercise to help me slip into a new character I was still struggling with.Oberon wrote: ↑Tue Jul 30, 2024 2:32 amhttps://abantiquo.aldergate.net/viewtop ... 163#p55163
Delightful read
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Wow! Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!Marlo wrote: ↑Tue Jul 30, 2024 8:59 am"Home Decrepit Home" by the writer of Orgasmerilla
I really enjoyed reading this while having my morning bowl of cereal before work! Also, hi! Welcome back!
And hi to you too!
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I'm glad you're exercising it! I've found that writing the characters actually helps to develop them. I know it seems dumb, but I've gotten stuck thinking about it instead of writing.Everly wrote: ↑Tue Jul 30, 2024 1:56 pmYes it does, and big thanks for the permission to use it.Yawa wrote: ↑Mon Jul 29, 2024 8:07 pmhttps://abantiquo.aldergate.net/viewtop ... =20&t=3317
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meowmeowmurdertwink meowmixmeow mix
also this cs format slaps
Thank you! It was a great exercise to help me slip into a new character I was still struggling with.Oberon wrote: ↑Tue Jul 30, 2024 2:32 amhttps://abantiquo.aldergate.net/viewtop ... 163#p55163
Delightful read
Also I love Gaz's crew! I know a few of us actually write out our thralls as a robbing crew and it's one of the things that tickles me the most. Great jov, Ann!
|MAHORELA-AMANDINE-DE DRAAK|
|SCHIARAFFA|
I have love in me the likes of which you can scarcely imagine and rage the likes of which you would not believe
vanitas vanitatum
|SCHIARAFFA|
I have love in me the likes of which you can scarcely imagine and rage the likes of which you would not believe
vanitas vanitatum
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Quoting this, because getting links while mobile is hard. This was legitimately so good. The writing style was smooth, to echo the sentiments above, but most importantly entertaining. I can’t wait to see the next posts!Marlo wrote: ↑Tue Jul 30, 2024 8:59 am"Home Decrepit Home" by the writer of Orgasmerilla
Your writing is always a joy to read. I love the way you've taken the broad idea of "thralls" that a lot of people use and turned them into actual characters. I've always loved this as a part of your character and I always will. Let the creativity flow! Also, super good uses of showing and not telling. I really enjoyed reading this while having my morning bowl of cereal before work! Also, hi! Welcome back!
I guess they say nobody's perfect...
But they've never met a devil like you.
But they've never met a devil like you.
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Agreed with everything above and
https://abantiquo.aldergate.net/viewtop ... 179#p55179
I'm going to need you to stop stomping on my feeling post haste ty
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I'm going to need you to stop stomping on my feeling post haste ty
|MAHORELA-AMANDINE-DE DRAAK|
|SCHIARAFFA|
I have love in me the likes of which you can scarcely imagine and rage the likes of which you would not believe
vanitas vanitatum
|SCHIARAFFA|
I have love in me the likes of which you can scarcely imagine and rage the likes of which you would not believe
vanitas vanitatum
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OH YAY SHE'S WRITING AGAIN. I will perceive you. Deal.
I really, REALLY love it when you use 2nd narrator POV. Brings out all the good stuff in your prose, M.
Beautiful work.
OH YAY SHE'S WRITING AGAIN. I will perceive you. Deal.
I really, REALLY love it when you use 2nd narrator POV. Brings out all the good stuff in your prose, M.
Beautiful work.
|MAHORELA-AMANDINE-DE DRAAK|
|SCHIARAFFA|
I have love in me the likes of which you can scarcely imagine and rage the likes of which you would not believe
vanitas vanitatum
|SCHIARAFFA|
I have love in me the likes of which you can scarcely imagine and rage the likes of which you would not believe
vanitas vanitatum