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Marlo
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OOC: carrot/aimee
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Tue Jul 30, 2024 8:59 am

"Home Decrepit Home" by the writer of Orgasmerilla


Your writing is always a joy to read. I love the way you've taken the broad idea of "thralls" that a lot of people use and turned them into actual characters. I've always loved this as a part of your character and I always will. Let the creativity flow! Also, super good uses of showing and not telling. I really enjoyed reading this while having my morning bowl of cereal before work! Also, hi! Welcome back!
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Everly
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OOC: Princess
IGN: Everly
Lineage: de Draak
Graphic Artist: Dee
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Tue Jul 30, 2024 1:56 pm

Yawa wrote:
Mon Jul 29, 2024 8:07 pm
https://abantiquo.aldergate.net/viewtop ... =20&t=3317

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meowmeowmurdertwink meowmixmeow mix

also this cs format slaps
Yes it does, and big thanks for the permission to use it.
Oberon wrote:
Tue Jul 30, 2024 2:32 am
https://abantiquo.aldergate.net/viewtop ... 163#p55163

Delightful read
Thank you! It was a great exercise to help me slip into a new character I was still struggling with.
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Orgasmerilla
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OOC: Ann
IGN: Orgasmerilla
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Tue Jul 30, 2024 2:36 pm

Marlo wrote:
Tue Jul 30, 2024 8:59 am
"Home Decrepit Home" by the writer of Orgasmerilla
I really enjoyed reading this while having my morning bowl of cereal before work! Also, hi! Welcome back!
Wow! Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
And hi to you too!
Orgasmerilla D'dary-Amandine
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Oberon
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OOC: Cia
IGN: Taltos Oberon
Lineage: Schiaraffa
Graphic Artist: Deen/Kris

Tue Jul 30, 2024 6:19 pm

Everly wrote:
Tue Jul 30, 2024 1:56 pm
Yawa wrote:
Mon Jul 29, 2024 8:07 pm
https://abantiquo.aldergate.net/viewtop ... =20&t=3317

hot

meowmeowmurdertwink meowmixmeow mix

also this cs format slaps
Yes it does, and big thanks for the permission to use it.
Oberon wrote:
Tue Jul 30, 2024 2:32 am
https://abantiquo.aldergate.net/viewtop ... 163#p55163

Delightful read
Thank you! It was a great exercise to help me slip into a new character I was still struggling with.
I'm glad you're exercising it! I've found that writing the characters actually helps to develop them. I know it seems dumb, but I've gotten stuck thinking about it instead of writing.

Also I love Gaz's crew! I know a few of us actually write out our thralls as a robbing crew and it's one of the things that tickles me the most. Great jov, Ann! :D
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Jaida
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Lineage: Pace
Graphic Artist: carrot

Tue Jul 30, 2024 7:05 pm

Marlo wrote:
Tue Jul 30, 2024 8:59 am
"Home Decrepit Home" by the writer of Orgasmerilla


Your writing is always a joy to read. I love the way you've taken the broad idea of "thralls" that a lot of people use and turned them into actual characters. I've always loved this as a part of your character and I always will. Let the creativity flow! Also, super good uses of showing and not telling. I really enjoyed reading this while having my morning bowl of cereal before work! Also, hi! Welcome back!
Quoting this, because getting links while mobile is hard. This was legitimately so good. The writing style was smooth, to echo the sentiments above, but most importantly entertaining. I can’t wait to see the next posts!
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Oberon
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Tue Jul 30, 2024 7:08 pm

Agreed with everything above and

https://abantiquo.aldergate.net/viewtop ... 179#p55179

I'm going to need you to stop stomping on my feeling post haste ty
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I have love in me the likes of which you can scarcely imagine and rage the likes of which you would not believe
vanitas vanitatum
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Oberon
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Tue Jul 30, 2024 9:06 pm

https://abantiquo.aldergate.net/viewtop ... 184#p55184

OH YAY SHE'S WRITING AGAIN. I will perceive you. Deal.
I really, REALLY love it when you use 2nd narrator POV. Brings out all the good stuff in your prose, M.
Beautiful work.
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Fera
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Wed Jul 31, 2024 9:24 pm

https://abantiquo.aldergate.net/viewtop ... 218#p55218

This is raw and real and I love it.
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jamessos
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Thu Aug 01, 2024 12:12 am

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Annabelle
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Thu Aug 01, 2024 11:14 am

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