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Anaïs
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Tue Dec 17, 2024 7:52 pm

Vanitas wrote:
Tue Dec 17, 2024 6:23 pm
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SECONDED, THIRDED, ALL OF IT. I love Alex with all of my being, I swear :lol: Alessio, you silly fool.
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Alex Ayres
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Tue Dec 17, 2024 8:27 pm

Vanitas wrote:
Tue Dec 17, 2024 6:23 pm
Anaïs wrote:
Tue Dec 17, 2024 7:52 pm
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Church
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Tue Dec 17, 2024 9:08 pm

Anaïs wrote:
Tue Dec 17, 2024 7:52 pm
Vanitas wrote:
Tue Dec 17, 2024 6:23 pm
viewtopic.php?f=16&t=355
SECONDED, THIRDED, ALL OF IT. I love Alex with all of my being, I swear :lol: Alessio, you silly fool.
100% Good stuff Alessio :D :D
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Alex Ayres
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Wed Dec 18, 2024 10:28 am

Church wrote:
Tue Dec 17, 2024 9:08 pm

I can only blush so much, Tex! Thank you.
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GrimreaperMoon
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Wed Dec 18, 2024 10:47 am

Vanitas wrote:
Tue Dec 17, 2024 6:23 pm

viewtopic.php?f=17&t=1650&start=150 - "There's more than just her, too - her family, or our family. A patchwork of fierce souls, each of us holding onto each other because no one else can. I know if I fall, I'll leave a hole in their hearts, the same kind I carry for those I've lost. Would they understand? Would they forgive me for letting go?

But what if I stay awake and fail them? What if my love isn't enough to keep them safe? I've seen enough of this world to know that love can't always stop the monsters. And yet - if I don't try, who will?"

Ma'am? OW? I love this. The emotions - so complex - and yet you never fall into the trap of melodrama and overstating feelings. You let the feelings speak for themselves.
<3 sweet thang!!!
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Oberon
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Mon Dec 30, 2024 3:01 am

viewtopic.php?f=15&p=59167#p59167

This. Obviously. IDK if Mictian's writer is reading this, but the way that this reads like a published novel is SO exciting and so rare for forum RP. Everything is so vivid, and the interaction is so genuine. Dialogue is bomb. Characters are bomb. Ambiance is excellent.

If you've not read this, especially if you're a younger RB writer, you ABSOLUTELY SHOULD. Legends meeting legends. Please give it a try, you won't regret it.
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pinkgothic
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Mon Dec 30, 2024 9:33 am

Oberon wrote:
Mon Dec 30, 2024 3:01 am
viewtopic.php?f=15&p=59167#p59167

This. Obviously. IDK if Mictian's writer is reading this, but the way that this reads like a published novel is SO exciting and so rare for forum RP. Everything is so vivid, and the interaction is so genuine. Dialogue is bomb. Characters are bomb. Ambiance is excellent.

If you've not read this, especially if you're a younger RB writer, you ABSOLUTELY SHOULD. Legends meeting legends. Please give it a try, you won't regret it.
Actually wept and went through two tissues three tissues apparently because I'm not done crying yet. Thank you so much. That hit me hard and it hit good. (If you're curious, it is technically IRC RP, i.e. played out in chat.)

Was just saying this on IRC:
[15:25] <Dread> <3 Appreciated! I got very emotional while writing it, honestly. Tied into my own feelings; Yawa has been exceptionally kind to me, after all, and I didn't want to mess with their vision. The question Mictian asks himself - is it okay to be vulnerable on the wall of someone who admires you? - that's very me, too. I don't have an answer, but I'm grateful it worked out this time.
I do write actual books these days (link to sample blurb edited in later!), incidentally, although not about vampires, and only in my spare time. Still making my living as a software engineer. Yawa needs to write a book, though; they're an absolute bombshell of a writer.
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Oberon
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Mon Dec 30, 2024 4:22 pm

pinkgothic wrote:
Mon Dec 30, 2024 9:33 am
Oberon wrote:
Mon Dec 30, 2024 3:01 am
viewtopic.php?f=15&p=59167#p59167

This. Obviously. IDK if Mictian's writer is reading this, but the way that this reads like a published novel is SO exciting and so rare for forum RP. Everything is so vivid, and the interaction is so genuine. Dialogue is bomb. Characters are bomb. Ambiance is excellent.

If you've not read this, especially if you're a younger RB writer, you ABSOLUTELY SHOULD. Legends meeting legends. Please give it a try, you won't regret it.
Actually wept and went through two tissues three tissues apparently because I'm not done crying yet. Thank you so much. That hit me hard and it hit good. (If you're curious, it is technically IRC RP, i.e. played out in chat.)

Was just saying this on IRC:
[15:25] <Dread> <3 Appreciated! I got very emotional while writing it, honestly. Tied into my own feelings; Yawa has been exceptionally kind to me, after all, and I didn't want to mess with their vision. The question Mictian asks himself - is it okay to be vulnerable on the wall of someone who admires you? - that's very me, too. I don't have an answer, but I'm grateful it worked out this time.
I do write actual books these days, incidentally, although not about vampires, and only in my spare time. Still making my living as a software engineer. Yawa needs to write a book, though; they're an absolute bombshell of a writer.
An absolute treat to both have you around enough to still give this little corner of the internet some attention, and moreover writing with Nikki—someone who I personally consider to be one of the best writers in this community. You two have made my year. :D

I'm glad you're back, if only for a little bit! I admire your writing a lot, and always have. I'm glad to see you continue to pursue it, and being able to bear witness to it.

Thank you both!
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pinkgothic
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Mon Dec 30, 2024 9:13 pm

Oberon wrote:
Mon Dec 30, 2024 4:22 pm
and moreover writing with Nikki—someone who I personally consider to be one of the best writers in this community.
Gets absolutely zero argument from me! <3
Oberon wrote:
Mon Dec 30, 2024 4:22 pm
You two have made my year. :D
Right back at you. Thank you for helping 2024 end on a banger. Absolutely honoured.

(I dropped a little sample of something into the General Writing board's Poetry/Non-Rp thread. It's not Ravenblack Vampires, but I think it might strike some of the same chords, and I came across it while looking up something while writing two scenes for my current work-in-progress novel earlier. Seemed like a good thing to share. <3)
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Oberon
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Mon Dec 30, 2024 11:17 pm

pinkgothic wrote:
Mon Dec 30, 2024 9:13 pm
Oberon wrote:
Mon Dec 30, 2024 4:22 pm
and moreover writing with Nikki—someone who I personally consider to be one of the best writers in this community.
Gets absolutely zero argument from me! <3
Oberon wrote:
Mon Dec 30, 2024 4:22 pm
You two have made my year. :D
Right back at you. Thank you for helping 2024 end on a banger. Absolutely honoured.

(I dropped a little sample of something into the General Writing board's Poetry/Non-Rp thread. It's not Ravenblack Vampires, but I think it might strike some of the same chords, and I came across it while looking up something while writing two scenes for my current work-in-progress novel earlier. Seemed like a good thing to share. <3)
I just read that! I really enjoyed it—it has a Frank Herbert vibe to the writing style that I really like.
From what I gather, this is a sort of race of warriors? They were attacked, and Duara’s group perished in an ambush, while she did not. She's being pressured into not being truthful to fit the views of those above her and avoid further punishment—much at the larger cost of her own morals.
It was a really tense read. Really makes you feel for Duara, here.

I think, from what I know, that you often explore the subjects of stoicism and the endurance of philosophical truths against the odds and the personal consequences when they don't, in fact, endure. You like the Fight against the Self. You like the fight of ego vs duty.

It really resonates. I enjoyed that a lot. Thank you so much for sharing!!!
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