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Jenny
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Tue May 15, 2018 11:14 am
It’s very descriptive writing, but it makes me feel queasy, so well done?

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Rain
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Tue May 15, 2018 11:30 am
I am 100% into this. Let's go. Where's the rest?
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Dea
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Wed May 16, 2018 5:57 pm
The entire thread about Liander.
Heart wrenching and beautifully done.
Mahorela | Flesh of His Flesh
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Arallara
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Wed May 16, 2018 6:14 pm
Dea wrote: ↑Wed May 16, 2018 5:57 pm
The entire thread about Liander.
Heart wrenching and beautifully done.
Agreed. 100% great writing showing amazing emotion for a character that touched most of the city in some way.
<3 Anthony’s <3
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Ezra
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Wed May 16, 2018 6:24 pm
thanks everybody! we appreciate it. as my OOC note stated, if you have a response to Liander's death that you wanna get out, feel free to respond in that thread!
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Ember
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Wed May 16, 2018 6:47 pm
Ezra wrote: ↑Wed May 16, 2018 6:24 pm
thanks everybody! we appreciate it. as my OOC note stated, if you have a response to Liander's death that you wanna get out, feel free to respond in that thread!
I'll try to work on mine tonight or tomorrow.
So heartwrenching a read, though. Right in the feels guys, thanks.

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Jenny
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Wed May 16, 2018 6:54 pm
Arallara wrote: ↑Wed May 16, 2018 6:14 pm
Dea wrote: ↑Wed May 16, 2018 5:57 pm
The entire thread about Liander.
Heart wrenching and beautifully done.
Agreed. 100% great writing showing amazing emotion for a character that touched most of the city in some way.
+1
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Ezra
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Wed May 16, 2018 7:50 pm
gah I always wish I could make words like Kris.
One day, it'll get lighter. That's what they all say. One day, you'll forget the weight of those you left behind. One day, it won't make you ache or sting tears into your eyes. One day, the boulder will crest the mountain, and all of this pointless toil will be over. One day, you'll be able to place all of those stones down, one by one, to lay them to rest in the Earth from whence they came.
Oh, one day, it'll get lighter.
brb fucking crying
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Ember
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Wed May 16, 2018 8:07 pm
Ezra wrote: ↑Wed May 16, 2018 7:50 pm
gah I always wish I could make words like Kris.
One day, it'll get lighter. That's what they all say. One day, you'll forget the weight of those you left behind. One day, it won't make you ache or sting tears into your eyes. One day, the boulder will crest the mountain, and all of this pointless toil will be over. One day, you'll be able to place all of those stones down, one by one, to lay them to rest in the Earth from whence they came.
Oh, one day, it'll get lighter.
brb fucking crying
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I'm in public. Can't cry but my throat is tight.
Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness.

It took me years to understand that this, too, was a gift.