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Marlo
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Fri Sep 06, 2024 10:27 pm

Dear Diaries Are Stupid by Max [Aly]

Just reread this first post and this hits so hard. I really, really loved it. There's so much character in one journal post and that's super hard to do.
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Marlo
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Location: Fir & 69th
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Sat Sep 07, 2024 1:07 pm

Marlo wrote:
Fri Sep 06, 2024 10:27 pm
Dear Diaries Are Stupid by Max [Aly]

Just reread this first post and this hits so hard. I really, really loved it. There's so much character in one journal post and that's super hard to do.
the update to this was so wholesome. i really enjoyed reading this! xo

Click here for wholesome update!
Hiram
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Wed Sep 11, 2024 5:03 pm

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I really enjoyed this, it has to be said. I loved the lore behind it, and the action felt punchy and impactful. Fight scenes can sometimes struggle when it comes to pacing, but the cadence of the sentences felt very "in your face." Good read.
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GrimreaperMoon
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Thu Sep 12, 2024 1:52 pm

Hiram wrote:
Wed Sep 11, 2024 5:03 pm
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I really enjoyed this, it has to be said. I loved the lore behind it, and the action felt punchy and impactful. Fight scenes can sometimes struggle when it comes to pacing, but the cadence of the sentences felt very "in your face." Good read.
Agree! This was a good read, kept me hooked from the beginning!
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