Conflict Coverage: Damacus VS The Void

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Reyna
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Sun Oct 22, 2017 12:25 pm

Ezra wrote:
Sun Oct 22, 2017 12:06 pm
Splinters Lite
What part of Void is at all like the Splinters beyond taking contracts and not having an open and defined member list?
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Sun Oct 22, 2017 1:05 pm

Good to have actual investigative reporting.
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Mon Oct 23, 2017 3:24 am

Even though we can make no comment about it at this time as a network, I can state two things personally. 1. I haven't bit up since Nems zeroed me yesterday, so I can't have hit and 2. The vampire Damacus has drunk 12221 pints of blood.
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Mon Oct 23, 2017 10:53 am

I'll agree with many others here that this is a decent article and I'm glad to see it reported.

If you'll allow me a bit of criticism:
Though presented well, I feel it could have been a bit more condensed to focus more on information at hand, rather than effectively burying it with unnecessary filler.

Of course, I don't mean every article must be bare bones - information only - but a few of the paragraphs were a tad much to pick through for one sliver of information.
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