What part of Void is at all like the Splinters beyond taking contracts and not having an open and defined member list?
Conflict Coverage: Damacus VS The Void
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KainsSon
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Even though we can make no comment about it at this time as a network, I can state two things personally. 1. I haven't bit up since Nems zeroed me yesterday, so I can't have hit and 2. The vampire Damacus has drunk 12221 pints of blood.
Sire of Two | Lyric's Beloved
The devil is in the details.
The devil is in the details.
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Chris Vahn
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I'll agree with many others here that this is a decent article and I'm glad to see it reported.
If you'll allow me a bit of criticism:
Though presented well, I feel it could have been a bit more condensed to focus more on information at hand, rather than effectively burying it with unnecessary filler.
Of course, I don't mean every article must be bare bones - information only - but a few of the paragraphs were a tad much to pick through for one sliver of information.
If you'll allow me a bit of criticism:
Though presented well, I feel it could have been a bit more condensed to focus more on information at hand, rather than effectively burying it with unnecessary filler.
Of course, I don't mean every article must be bare bones - information only - but a few of the paragraphs were a tad much to pick through for one sliver of information.
