Just wanted to shout out the amazing writing partners I have currently!
Princess- Your posts have such amazing introspection. Depth of character. I've loved how you've begun every post with Everly. It's been such a treat to read.
Anders- Your first post was just oozing such good lore. It has this otherworldly feel you'd imagine an entity like an Angel to have. It feels so distinct and a joy to engage with.
Seyda- I mean you know I'm a fan but every post of yours feels so much like your character. Disciplined, direct, but with these cracks of emotion you have to search for but then are so loud.
Thank you for letting me write with yall ^^
RP APPRECIATION
- Marlo
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- Lineage: Pace
- Graphic Artist: me, baby
"Argentum" by the writer of Vex
had to quote those first two sentences. now THAT is some banging prose. It's giving academics in the right way. Not stiff, very clear prose, but a great beginning.Vex wrote:Once upon a time, it was said that vampires couldn’t see their reflection in mirrors. Vampires, they reasoned, couldn’t come into contact with pure things, and silver was said to be a pure metal.
- Oberon
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I particularly enjoy this passage. It has so much good weight to it. The pacing is fantastic.Like Frankenstein’s monster, you’re an amalgam of stolen parts. You’ve hacked off pieces of yourself and replaced them with more palatable scraps - something to fit others’ desires. What you thought they wanted. You don’t know when you started forcing yourself to be useful at all costs: a weapon, a tool, or a loaded tongue. More than anything else, you wanted to be of service. Being loved on your own merit seemed too lofty a goal for something so unworthy.
How often have you cut away pieces of yourself to fit into someone else’s mould? When did you start?
Loved the piece, Lytha bb <3 Good soup.
|MAHORELA-AMANDINE-DE DRAAK|
|SCHIARAFFA|
I have love in me the likes of which you can scarcely imagine and rage the likes of which you would not believe
vanitas vanitatum
|SCHIARAFFA|
I have love in me the likes of which you can scarcely imagine and rage the likes of which you would not believe
vanitas vanitatum
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- Everly
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- IC/OOC Only: Both
All of the above. I've been trying to find words to describe how heavily impactful Lyssa's piece is, but keep failing. I haven't felt that emotional reading something since Addie LaRue, and almost never in a RP.
Thanks for giving me something to hurt to and to aspire to.
Thanks for giving me something to hurt to and to aspire to.
N I G H T W A T C H - L I E U T E N A N T | T H E - G R A C E S
Thank you guys!
I've been working on that thing for like a month and I'm glad it came together well enough to hurt. <3
I've been working on that thing for like a month and I'm glad it came together well enough to hurt. <3
- Oberon
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https://abantiquo.aldergate.net/viewtop ... =17&t=3350
I hadnt realised you'd already posted this, Princess. Fantastic writing. I enjoy how vivid the fighting scene is, and how dynamic Everly is as a character. Also love the layout.
I hadnt realised you'd already posted this, Princess. Fantastic writing. I enjoy how vivid the fighting scene is, and how dynamic Everly is as a character. Also love the layout.
|MAHORELA-AMANDINE-DE DRAAK|
|SCHIARAFFA|
I have love in me the likes of which you can scarcely imagine and rage the likes of which you would not believe
vanitas vanitatum
|SCHIARAFFA|
I have love in me the likes of which you can scarcely imagine and rage the likes of which you would not believe
vanitas vanitatum
https://abantiquo.aldergate.net/viewtop ... =15&t=3362
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAS!
So glad to see you're posting! Welcome back!! Can't wait to see more of Mobius' return to the land of the [sort of] living! <3
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAS!
So glad to see you're posting! Welcome back!! Can't wait to see more of Mobius' return to the land of the [sort of] living! <3
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I second this.Aziza wrote: ↑Sat Aug 24, 2024 10:16 pmhttps://abantiquo.aldergate.net/viewtop ... =15&t=3362
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAS!
This just sinks it's hooks in you and leaves you wanting more.
Orgasmerilla D'dary-Amandine
Nightwatch Constable
Wow. Very flattering and humbling. Thank you both!Orgasmerilla wrote: ↑Mon Aug 26, 2024 9:23 pmI second this.
This just sinks it's hooks in you and leaves you wanting more.